Welcome to my blog, Diane.
Please tell us about your new release.
The Evolution of The Case of the Fabulous Fiancé.
Six years ago, I thought it would be fun to write a story about a female private investigator. When I was a kid, I read all my mother’s Nancy Drew books plus the ones I got from the library and as gifts. In the 1980s, I fell in love with the TV show Remington Steel. (Loved Laura’s hat.) I didn’t like that she had to use a guy as a front while she did all the work. My investigator wouldn’t do that. She was her own girl and would be a success because of her hard work. In the 1990s, I discovered Stephanie Plum, Janet Evanovich’s screwball bounty hunter who makes Lucy and Ethel look like amateurs. I learned not to read those books before going to sleep. I’d laugh so hard the bed would shake. While I didn’t want my PI to be a screw-up, I wanted the stories to be humorous.
So I started writing the first Alex O’Hara mystery.
A friend of mine is a retired police chief. I’m always asking him questions, and he always tells me more, which gives me better ideas. The more I wrote, the more I realized I was adding too much back story—how Alex inherited the agency from her father and his business partner, how her old heartthrob Nick came back into her life, and many other details that had taken place in the past. As much as I liked her, I didn’t think the reader would enjoy info dumps. By that time, I’d written over half the story.
My parents came of age during the Great Depression, so I was brought up on the adage “waste not, want not.” I never throw away story ideas or half-finished manuscripts. I set Alex’s story aside to write science fiction romances and a romantic suspense. But she kept nudging me to tell her story.
A writer can only hold out for so long. Nudging became poking that led to yelling in my ear as I tried to go to sleep. I couldn’t take it anymore. So I hauled out that manuscript and went to work. All that backstory became The Case of the Bygone Brother, published last year. What started out as the first book in the series then became the second, The Case of the Fabulous Fiancé.
It’s been said that it’s easier to write a new story than to rewrite an old one. How true. The next Alex O’Hara story will be much easier. I can’t wait to dive into it.
The Case of the Fabulous Fiancé (An Alex O’Hara Novel) by Diane Burton
A PI mystery
She’s at it again. Alex O’Hara just can’t say no to a new investigation. What do a 45-year-old boyfriend, a deadbeat dad, and a teenage runaway have in common? All new cases. With no receptionist, phone and internet problems, and her own boyfriend in the wind, Alex has no idea how she’ll manage. But the question for the past three months is why did Nick disappear. Is this the end of O’Hara & Palzetti?
I picked up the pen before looking at Nora Finley. Even though I was in the middle of a major case, I never turned down a prospective client. At least, not right away. I’d hear her out and then decide.
“What can I do for you?”
Her expression completely changed. The high-powered exec disappeared. In its place, caution and . . . vulnerability. “Ellen VanderVeen said I could trust you.”
I smiled. Ellen and I had been friends since college. That girl had more fashion sense in her baby finger than I did in my entire body.
“Yes, I know Ellen.”
“She said you helped her investigate her fiancé.”
She hesitated and appeared to rethink what she was doing in a private investigator’s office. Quickly, she came to a conclusion. “I’d like you to do the same.”
“You want me to vet your fiancé?”
“He’s not my fiancé. Yet.”
She didn’t explain any further, so I asked, “Why? Do you suspect something?”
“No. Oh, goodness, no.” She pursed her lips before continuing. “My father left me a prosperous financial firm plus a sizeable inheritance. I am not saying that to brag but to explain my concerns. In my younger days, I was, uhm, taken advantage of. I need to be sure this man truly loves me—me, not my money.”
Although nobody would ever mistake me for an heiress, I understood her caution.
“I am almost forty years old,” she said. “I want to have children before I’m too old.”
Again, I understood. I’d recently passed a landmark birthday. The big Three-Oh. Rather than worry about kids, though, I devoted myself to my business. After a rocky start, I was on a pretty even keel. Plenty of work. Not enough time. But I did have plenty of time before settling down with kids. And a husband, of course. I’m kind of old-fashioned like that. I’d thought Nick might— Don’t go there.
“Ma’am, if you’d called for an appointment, I could have saved you a trip. I do not have time to devote to your case.”
A crestfallen Nora Finley stared at me, her mouth slightly open. I guess nobody ever turned her down. While hers might be interesting, I didn’t have a good feeling about this case. A client might want the lowdown on a prospective mate—as I’d discovered before—but they often resented the bearer of bad news. Of course, the client could be grateful if the news was good, like my friend Ellen.
“I will double your usual retainer.”
“It isn’t a matter of money—” Although money never hurt. “—I’m in the middle of a large case that is taking up all of my time.”
“How soon will you finish?” No longer disappointed, she looked calculating.
God save me from rich people who think everyone should drop what they’re doing to attend to them.
“Three weeks, minimum.”
“Good. I will be out of the country for the next four weeks. You may finish your present case then check into Clyde Wilson.”
Well, shit. I mean, shoot. I was trying to break my bad habit of swearing. I had misgivings about this woman. Demanding, she was going to be difficult to work with. She exuded the power that came from old money. Power that expected everyone to drop everything and do her bidding.
But then I’d had difficult clients before and managed them. I could probably wrap up the fraud investigation in a couple of weeks. I’d given myself a cushion when I’d told her three.
Were my misgivings about her enough to turn down double my retainer?
I drew the pad closer to me. “Tell me about this man. Clyde Wilson?”
That better not be a smug look on her face.
Diane Burton combines her love of mystery, adventure, science fiction and romance into writing romantic fiction. Besides the science fiction romance Switched and Outer Rim series, she is the author of One Red Shoe, a romantic suspense, and The Case of the Bygone Brother, a PI mystery. She is also a contributor to the anthology How I Met My Husband. Diane and her husband live in Michigan. They have two children and three grandchildren.
For more info and excerpts from her books, visit Diane’s website: http://www.dianeburton.com
Connect with Diane Burton online
Goodreads: Diane Burton Author
Sign up for Diane’s new release alert: http://eepurl.com/bdHtYf
25 thoughts on “Guest Diane Burton & The Case of the Fabulous Fiance from Barbara Edwards”
I had a similar circumstance when writing a book. I began it, and then realized that the backstory needed to be written first. So my beginning became my middle. Funny how each book always has an unique story behind the story. Thanks for sharing yours!
I’m glad I’m not alone, MJ. Some stories need to be written. Thanks for stopping by.
Love hearing about the shows and and books that influenced you. I too loved Remington Steele! 😻
A very young Pierce Brosnan. Love watching this show in reruns. Thanks for stopping by, Darcy.
I always love learning more about author’s thinking processes with regards to their writing! Thanks for sharing Diane!
Thanks, Melissa. I do, too. It’s always amazing how authors think.
Great story & excerpt!
Very cool! I love learning about how books come to be. Who would have known book 2 was actually book 1? 🙂 However they came about, both the books are fabulous, and I’m looking forward to book 3!
Thanks, Alicia. I’m looking forward to writing book 3. LOL
Congrats on your release!
Congrats on your release, Diane. Looking forward to another Alex O’Hara mystery!
Hey Diane, so true about being easier to write a new novel than pick up the threads of a previous work. Loved the excerpt. Good luck with the book.
Thanks, Nicole. So much easier to start from scratch. But it can be done.
I think your Alex series is great. Good Luck!
Thanks, Barb. And thanks for all your suggestions while I was writing it.
Wishing you many sales for what sounds like a great read. Linda Nightingale
Thanks for the good wishes, Linda.
Interesting process, Diane. I’m so glad you made it all work, especially that you now have two books instead of one! Yay, you!
Thanks, Marissa. I wouldn’t recommend my method. LOL
I love the idea of a series and your protag seems very canny. I know what you mean about putting away a ms that keeps whispering in your ear for finality! Good luck with your writing.
Thanks, Susan. There are some stories that just won’t leave you alone. Alex is becoming quite a pest about book 3. LOL
Thanks for having me on your blog, Barbara. Love the winter scene up top. Delightfully winter.